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Swimming in an endless sea,
Living under the water so free,
Light above, Darkness below,
Where it started, no one knows.

Searching as I transcend,
Willing to comprehend,
What more could there be,
Other than the endless sea.

Is there another world above?
It's inhabitants able to love?

What would I give,
To find a way to live,
Out of the sea,
If only it could be.

I know not of that world,
Its stories untold,
beckoning me closer,
Like a song from it's composer.

Do I stay or do I swim?
Lose some scales and gain more skin?
Should I leave what I know behind,
And seek out a brighter sky?
I'm pretty proud of this one. I'd like to dedicate this poem to all those lovely mermaids out there.
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19andMugsy Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nicely penned. I'll tell all those whom I know hehe 
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kaze333 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. and Thanks for the :+fav: :)
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:icon19andmugsy:
19andMugsy Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :) :hug:
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Lunariel7 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Shared on my facebook page here: [link] :meow:
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kaze333 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so happy you posted this. I've already commented on it :heart:
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Lunariel7 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:3
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Redheadmermaid1 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Your a wonderful poet, very nice job
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kaze333 Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much.
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fugimoto Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
reminds me of little mermaid! =3
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kaze333 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I realized when I finished it.
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